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officecli-pitch-deck

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Build a stage-aware fundraising pitch deck (.pptx) with the 10-slide VC arc and credible numbers.

What it does

A scene layer on top of officecli-pptx that produces investor pitch decks as a single .pptx. Stage (Seed, Series A/B/C, Bridge/SAFE) is picked first and drives slide count, narrative weight, and which metrics are must-haves. Ships 10 key-slide recipes in a fixed order (cover, problem, solution, market, product, model, traction, team, financials, ask), vertical arc templates for B2B SaaS, Consumer, Deep Tech, and Marketplace, plus a pitch-specific Delivery Gate 6. Requires three-layer TAM/SAM/SOM, ARR curves that start at 0, four-bucket Use-of-Funds, team slide with prior-company credentials, and a fresh-eyes pass. Inherits pptx v2 visual floor, 12-column grid, palettes, connector canon, and…

When to use it

  • Drafting a Series A deck with PMF proof and unit economics
  • Producing a Series B deck with ARR curve, CAC/LTV, and payback
  • Building a consumer Series A with product visuals and "why now"
  • Assembling a deep tech Series B with benchmarks, TRL, and IP

The skill document

OfficeCLI Pitch Deck Skill

This skill is a scene layer on top of officecli-pptx. Every pptx hard rule — visual delivery floor (title ≥ 36pt / body ≥ 18pt / title ≥ 2× body), 12-column grid on 33.87×19.05cm, 4 canonical palettes, chart-choice decision table, connector canon (shape / from / to / tailEnd=triangle), shell escape, resident + batch, Delivery Gate 1–5a — is inherited, not re-taught. This file adds only what fundraising needs on top: stage diagnosis (A / B / C), 5 赛道 arc templates, 10 key-slide recipes (cover / problem / solution / market / product / model / traction / team / financials / ask), pitch-specific numbers convention, a VC ship-check, and a pitch-specific fresh-eyes Gate 6.

When the pptx base rules cover it, the text here says → see pptx v2 §X. Read skills/officecli-pptx/SKILL.md first if you have not.

Setup

If officecli is missing:

  • macOS / Linux: curl -fsSL https://d.officecli.ai/install.sh | bash
  • Windows (PowerShell): irm https://d.officecli.ai/install.ps1 | iex

Verify with officecli --version (open a new terminal if PATH hasn't picked up). If install fails, download a binary from https://github.com/iOfficeAI/OfficeCLI/releases.

⚠️ Help-First Rule

This skill teaches what a fundraising deck requires, not every command flag. When a prop name, enum value, or preset is uncertain, consult help BEFORE guessing.

officecli help pptx                          # All pptx elements
officecli help pptx                 # Full schema (e.g. chart, shape, connector, picture)
officecli help pptx  --json         # Machine-readable

Help reflects the installed CLI version. When this skill and help disagree, help wins. Every --prop X= in this file has been grep-verified against officecli help pptx — if help adds / renames a prop in a later version, trust help.

Mental Model & Inheritance

Inherits pptx v2. You should have read skills/officecli-pptx/SKILL.md first. This skill assumes you know how to: add slides + shapes + charts + connectors; address by @name= / @id=; quote paths; use batch heredocs; write --prop tailEnd=triangle on every flow connector; and run the 5-gate Delivery Gate. If any of those are unfamiliar, open a pptx v2 session before continuing.

Shell & Execution Discipline

Shell quoting, incremental execution, $FILE convention → see pptx v2 §Shell & Execution Discipline. Same rules verbatim — quote [N] paths, single-quote values containing $ (including $35M, $1.2B TAM in a cover or ask slide), never hand-write \$ \t \n in executable examples, one command at a time. Examples below use $FILE (FILE="deck.pptx").

Single-quote every shape text containing $. --prop text="Series B · $35M" (double quotes) is WRONG — zsh expands $35M → empty, deck renders Series B · M silently. --prop text='Series B · $35M' (single quotes) is right. This is the #1 pitch-deck shell-escape failure mode ($35M, $18M ARR, $1.2B TAM appear on cover/ask/financials/milestones). Gate 2 cannot detect a stripped $35M — no residue. Gate 2b catches common strip patterns; single-quoting PREVENTS them.

What "pitch deck" means here (identity)

A pitch deck is a pptx with a fundraising layer on top: VC-oriented narrative arc, verifiable metrics, stage-appropriate data density, founder-credibility surface. Slides are consumed at ~3 seconds per slide in a live room — the pptx v2 rule. Pitch decks add a second constraint on top: every slide carries one investable proposition. If a slide is "interesting background" that doesn't move the ask forward, cut it. VCs will not. The base pptx rules still apply; pitch decks add six deltas:

  1. Stage determines everything. Series A / B / C each dictates slide count, narrative weight, which metrics are must-haves, and tolerance for unit-econ sophistication. A Series A deck with 6 pages of CAC/LTV math reads as over-packaged; a Series B deck missing unit econ reads as incomplete. Pick the stage first — everything downstream follows.
  2. Narrative arc beats feature dump. 10 essential slides in a fixed order: cover → problem → solution → market → product → model → traction → team → financials → ask. Out of order = VCs disengage.
  3. Numbers are a contract. TAM/SAM/SOM must be clean three-layer; CAC/LTV must have a payback line; ARR ≠ revenue; Use-of-Funds must be a four-bucket pie. Sloppy numbers = round dies.
  4. Team slide carries prior companies. Avatar grid alone reads as a student project. Add prior-company logos / names + one-line role. Without this, first-time founders look exactly like first-time founders.
  5. Traction chart y-axis starts at 0. A "hockey stick" starting at y_min = 80% of current is a visual lie — VCs who have seen 10,000 decks spot it in < 2 seconds.
  6. The ask is a slide, not a footnote. $XX M hero + four-bucket Use-of-Funds + runway length. "We're raising some money" is not an ask.

Reverse handoff — when to go BACK to pptx base

Stay in pptx v2 base for board reviews, all-hands, sales decks, product launches, training decks — anything not tied to raising capital. Use this skill only when: (a) the user mentions a specific round (seed / Series A / B / C) or a VC meeting, AND (b) the deck needs at least 4 of {problem, traction, team with credentials, Use-of-Funds, stage-appropriate unit econ, financial projections}.

If the user says "fundraising deck" but the context is a corporate BU quarterly ask, that is a board review. Route to pptx v2 Recipe (d) 10-slide blueprint. If the user says "board review" but the context is a small company raising a bridge round, route here.

Series A / B / C stage diagnosis (decision tool)

Read this before writing a single command. Pick the row that matches the user's description — everything downstream (slide count, which metrics, which recipes, what the team slide must show) derives from this one call.

StageRevenue bandTeamSlide countDominant narrative (weight)Must-have dataCommon red flag
Seed$0 – $1M ARR (often pre-rev)2 – 8 FTE10 – 12Problem (30%) + Solution (25%) + Team (15%) + Market (15%) + Traction (15%)Founder-market fit story; 1 – 2 design-partner / pilot logos; top-down TAM okOver-claiming traction (10 customers = "market proven")
Series A$1 – $5M ARR10 – 25 FTE12 – 16Problem (20%) + Solution (20%) + Market "why now" (15%) + Product (15%) + Traction (20%) + Team (10%)PMF proof (NRR > 110%, low churn), bottom-up TAM/SAM, pipeline / pilots convertedBottom-up TAM feels fabricated; CAC not yet meaningful but shown anyway
Series B$5 – $30M ARR30 – 100 FTE18 – 22Traction + Unit econ (30%) + Market + Product + Team + Financials (ask)ARR curve starting at 0; NRR, CAC, LTV, payback (< 18 mo ideal); cohort retention; logo wallNo unit-econ slide; CAC payback > 24mo without explanation; Use-of-Funds missing %
Series C$30M+ ARR100+ FTE20 – 24Financials + Scale + Moat (40%) + Market expansion + Team depthMulti-year GAAP, rule-of-40, GM trajectory, international expansion plan, defensibilityNo moat slide; revenue growth without margin story; team slide has no prior CEO / CFO
Bridge / SAFEanyany8 – 10Specific bridge reason + runway math + commitmentsPrior round context; specific milestone the bridge funds; committed investor amountTreating a bridge like a Series A — too many slides dilutes the ask

Decision procedure. From one or two user sentences ("Series B, $18M ARR, 120 customers, $35M raise"), pick exactly one stage row. All later choices in this skill reference your stage: which 赛道 template to pull, which recipes are mandatory vs optional, and which Delivery Gate 6 checks fire.

Corner cases. Bridge rounds & convertibles between A → B are closer to A or B depending on whether the bridge milestone is "finish PMF" (A shape) or "hit unit-econ target" (B shape). "Extension" rounds at the same stage reuse the earlier stage's skeleton and add a one-slide "progress since last round" update.

Non-SaaS stage overrides. The ARR / unit-econ shape of Series B fits SaaS. For other verticals, substitute revenue band + unit-econ equivalent + Gate 6.3 grep:

VerticalRevenue "band" at Series B"Unit econ" equivalentGate 6.3 substitute
Bio / Clinical-stagepre-rev, 20–60 FTEburn rate + runway to next milestone (IND / Ph1 readout / BLA)shape:contains("ORR") OR contains("Pipeline") OR contains("BLA") OR contains("runway") ≥ 1
Deep Tech / Frontierpre-rev or early pilot revtechnical milestones + TRL level + benchmark vs SoTAshape:contains("TRL") OR contains("benchmark") ≥ 1
Marketplace / NetworkGMV $10–100Mtake rate + cohort retention + liquidityshape:contains("GMV") + contains("take rate") ≥ 1
Consumer hardware$2–15M revenue (shipped units)contribution margin + repeat rate + blended CACshape:contains("repeat") OR contains("contribution") ≥ 1

Substitute the analogue grep when running Gate 6.3 on these verticals. False WARN on SaaS CAC/LTV = expected; real concern = vertical-specific analogue present. Bio Series B decks especially: burn + runway-to-milestone IS the "unit econ" story.

赛道 arc templates (5 families)

5 mainstream verticals. Each one has different slide weights because what VCs require as proof-of-concept differs. Pick the vertical row; the slide skeleton is a copy-able starting point. Slide counts assume the matching stage row above.

(1) B2B SaaS / Enterprise software

Canonical arc — the template most of VC muscle memory is built on. Series B example (20 slides): cover · TL;DR · problem · problem evidence · solution · product loop · market TAM/SAM/SOM · unit economics (CAC / LTV / payback / GM) · ARR trajectory · retention cohort · logo wall · team · competitors · financials 4-year · ask. Must-have: unit-econ slide from Series A onward; logo wall from Series B onward.

(2) Consumer (B2C app / consumer hardware / D2C)

Narrative-driven. Early-stage decks lean on product-experience screenshots + founding story + "why now" market timing; lighter on unit econ (which are usually weaker than SaaS). Series A example (14 slides): cover · hook (30-second product demo or 1-line vision) · problem (lived experience) · solution (product shots) · product-experience flow · "why now" market window · pre-order / crowdfunding / early-sales evidence · retention / engagement (DAU, D30) · market (top-down ok if bottom-up unreliable) · competitive positioning · founder story + team · press / endorsements · financials · ask. Must-have: product visuals on ≥ 3 slides; "why now" slide (window justification); engagement metric not just revenue.

(3) Deep Tech / Frontier tech (AI foundation models, quantum, climate hardware, robotics)

Technology credibility is the sell. Pre-revenue deep tech replaces "traction" with technical milestones + defensibility. Series B example (22 slides): cover · thesis (one-line "what changes if this works") · problem (current state of art) · solution (technical approach) · technology architecture · benchmarks vs SoTA · pipeline / TRL levels · market (long-tail) · business model · early commercial traction (pilots, LOIs) · IP / patents · team (usually PhD / ex-FAANG-research) · partners · financials · ask. Must-have: benchmark slide; IP slide; team slide dense with PhDs / prior-lab names.

(4) Marketplace / Network business (two-sided platform, social, commerce)

Liquidity is the metric. Replace "unit econ" with GMV + take rate + cohort retention + supply / demand balance. Series A example (15 slides): cover · problem (friction in current supply-demand) · solution · product demo (both sides) · network effects diagram · early liquidity (first-week GMV, time-to-match) · cohort retention · geographic / category expansion plan · competitive positioning vs incumbents · take-rate model · team · financials · ask. Must-have: liquidity metric slide; cohort retention chart; network-effect diagram.

(5) Bio / Life sciences / Healthtech

Regulatory pipeline IS the business. Replace "product roadmap" with clinical pipeline + regulatory path + scientific evidence. Series B example (22 slides): cover · unmet medical need · scientific rationale (mechanism of action) · preclinical / clinical data (ORR, safety, endpoints) · pipeline chart (candidates × stages × dates) · differentiation vs standard of care · IP / exclusivity · regulatory strategy (IND, BTD, fast-track) · market (prevalence × pricing) · commercial strategy (orphan / specialty / biosimilar) · partnerships / collaborations · team (CSO / CMO with prior FDA wins) · financials (burn to next milestone) · ask. Must-have: pipeline chart; clinical data slide; team slide with prior regulatory wins.

Cross-vertical rule. You can mix elements across templates, but never drop a must-have from your primary vertical. A SaaS deck missing unit econ, a bio deck missing a pipeline chart, a marketplace deck missing a liquidity metric — each is an instant VC disqualification.

Slide Patterns (layout canon)

Patterns are layout geometry; recipes below are narrative intent. A slide picks one pattern for its visual shape (6 canonical ones below) and one recipe for what it argues (cover / problem / traction / ...). Multiple recipes can share one pattern — Problem / Why-Now / Traction-callout all lean on the 3-stat row (C.2). Pick the pattern first, then fill it with recipe content.

Speaker notes rule. Every content slide (non-cover, non-closing) MUST carry speaker notes via officecli add "$FILE" /slide[N] --type notes --prop text='…'. Missing notes = not shippable — inherits pptx v2 §Hard rules (H7). Run officecli help pptx notes to confirm prop names before building.

Pattern reuse discipline. Never run the same pattern on two consecutive slides — even with different data, two identical geometries in a row read as a template loop. Alternate C.2 with C.4 or C.5b to break rhythm.

Vertical centering. When a slide carries fewer elements than the pattern's maximum, nudge y-positions down 2–3cm to center the visual weight. Tables below assume full content.

C.1 Title / Cover (dark gradient)

3–4 text shapes on a gradient fill. Slide 1 in every deck.

+----------------------------------+
|                                  |
|          TITLE (centered)        |
|          tagline                 |
|                                  |
|   round · amount · date          |
|  ________________________        |  <- thin brand band
+----------------------------------+
ElementXYWidthHeightFont / size
Title2cm5cm29.87cm4cmserif bold, ≥ 36pt (44 typical)
Tagline2cm10cm29.87cm2cmsans 18–22pt
Meta (round · $ · date)2cm13cm29.87cm1.5cmsans 12–16pt

Use this when the slide is the first one (Cover recipe 1) — 3-second identity grab. Background is a 180° linear gradient between two dark palette shades (e.g. Professional Navy 1E2761 → 0D1F35). If the title wraps to 2 lines, add height (4cm → 5cm), never drop font below 36pt — sub-36pt on a pitch cover reads as timid regardless of content. Transition: fade.

C.2 3-Stat callout row

Title + 3 big-number / label pairs across. The default for Problem / Why-Now / Traction-callout slides.

+----------------------------------+
|  Title                           |
|                                  |
|   73%      12hr      $4.2B       |
|   label    label     label       |
|   source   source    source      |
+----------------------------------+
ElementXYWidthHeightFont / size
Title1.5cm1cm30.87cm3cmserif bold ≥ 36pt
Stat 1 number2cm5cm9cm4cmserif bold 60–64pt
Stat 1 label2cm9.5cm9cm2cmsans ≥ 16pt (H4 floor)
Stat 2 number / label12.5cm(same)9cm(same)(same)
Stat 3 number / label23cm(same)9cm(same)(same)

Use this when you have 2–3 anchoring numbers and the story is "three facts argue the point" — Problem, Why-Now, Market-callout, single-row Traction. Labels ≥ 16pt is the H4 floor (sub-label exception); a number without a label reads as bravado, so never drop labels to 12–14pt to fit more text.

C.3 4-Stat callout row

Same geometry as C.2 but 4 columns. Numbers 60pt, width 7cm each.

+-------------------------------------+
|  Title                              |
|                                     |
|  73%   12hr   $9M   4.2x            |
|  lbl   lbl    lbl   lbl             |
+-------------------------------------+
ElementX positionsYWidthHeightFont / size
Title1.5cm1cm30.87cm3cmserif bold 36pt
Stat numbers1.5 / 9.5 / 17.5 / 25.5cm5cm7cm4cmserif bold 60pt
Stat labels(same X)9.5cm7cm2cmsans ≥ 16pt

Use this when exactly 4 parallel metrics tell the story and 3 feels under-counted. Prefer C.2 if in doubt — 4 always feels tighter than 3, and wrap risk is real.

Wrap warning. At 60pt in 7cm width, dollar patterns with both $ and . fail: $9.4M is 5 glyphs but the wide $ and . in a serif bold make it wrap to 2 lines and destroy the callout. Safe dollar shapes at 60pt/7cm: $9M, $96B, $4K (3–4 chars). Non-dollar shapes: 340%, 4.2x, 12.3 safe up to 5 chars. Values ≥ 6 chars (197min, 3 Days) will wrap — either (a) drop font to 44–48pt, (b) abbreviate (197m, $9M), or (c) shift to C.2 (9cm per stat). Single tokens only, no internal spaces.

C.4 Chart + Context (chart left, stats right)

Chart takes left 55%, 2–3 stacked callouts on the right. The default for Traction / Financials / Market-sizing-with-context.

+-------------------------------------+
|  Title                              |
|                                     |
|  +---------------+   +--------+     |
|  |               |   | Stat 1 |     |
|  |    chart      |   +--------+     |
|  |               |   | Stat 2 |     |
|  +---------------+   +--------+     |
+-------------------------------------+
ElementXYWidthHeight
Title2cm1cm29.87cm3cm
Chart2cm4cm17cm13cm
Stats column21cm4cm+11cm2.5cm number + 1.5cm label (~3.7cm per pair)

Sub-labels ≥ 16pt (H4 floor). For 5 stats stacked, drop number size to 44pt; 6+ stats means pick a different pattern. Post-batch for column/bar charts: officecli set "$FILE" "/slide[N]/chart[1]" --prop gap=80 to tighten bar spacing.

Use this when one primary chart drives the story and 2–3 numeric anchors reinforce it — Traction (ARR curve + current ARR + YoY + NRR), Financials (4-year column chart + assumption callouts), Market (bar chart + SOM / CAGR / methodology).

C.5 Icon-in-circle grid (3-row vertical)

3 vertical rows, each = circle icon on the left + title + 1-line description.

+---------------------------------------+
|  Title                                |
|                                       |
|  (o)  Label one                       |
|       description one                 |
|                                       |
|  (o)  Label two                       |
|       description two                 |
|                                       |
|  (o)  Label three                     |
|       description three               |
+---------------------------------------+
ElementXY positionsWidthHeightFont / size
Icon circle2cm4.5 / 8.5 / 12.5cm2.5cm2.5cmellipse, accent fill
Label5.5cm(icon Y + 0)25cm1.2cmsans bold 18pt
Description5.5cm(icon Y + 1.3cm)25cm1.8cmsans ≥ 16pt (H4 floor), muted

Use this when you have 3 short vertical points that benefit from a visual anchor per row — Solution mechanism, Value pillars, Product loop. Choose C.5b (2×2 grid) when items are parallel and you have exactly 4; choose a horizontal 5-across variant when icons should read side-by-side (e.g. 5-step process).

C.5b 2×2 Feature grid (4 parallel items)

4 rounded cards, 2 columns × 2 rows. Use when you have exactly 4 parallel items (product pillars, service types, feature quadrants).

+-----------------------------+
|  Title                      |
|                             |
|  +---------+  +---------+   |
|  | (o) T1  |  | (o) T2  |   |
|  | body    |  | body    |   |
|  +---------+  +---------+   |
|  +---------+  +---------+   |
|  | (o) T3  |  | (o) T4  |   |
|  | body    |  | body    |   |
|  +---------+  +---------+   |
+-----------------------------+
ElementXYWidthHeightFont / size
Slide title2cm1cm29.87cm2.5cmserif bold 32pt
Card 1 bg (top-left)1.5cm4cm14.5cm7cmroundRect
Card 2 bg (top-right)17.5cm4cm14.5cm7cmroundRect
Card 3 bg (bottom-left)1.5cm12cm14.5cm7cmroundRect
Card 4 bg (bottom-right)17.5cm12cm14.5cm7cmroundRect
Icon ellipse (each card)card_x + 0.5cmcard_y + 0.5cm2cm2cm—
Card title (each)card_x + 3.2cmcard_y + 0.6cm10.5cm1.8cmsans bold 16pt
Card body (each)card_x + 0.5cmcard_y + 3cm13cm3.5cmsans ≥ 16pt (H4 floor)

Use this when you have exactly 4 parallel items and the eye should land on each equally — 4 product pillars, 4 service tiers, 4 stakeholder types. 3 items feel lonely in a 2×2; 5+ items break the grid — go to a 3×2 (see pptx v2 §(d) grid math) or C.5 row pattern.

Z-order canon (critical). Each card's roundRect background must be added immediately before that card's icon / title / body shapes in the batch JSON — pptx paints in insertion order, so a background added after its text paints over and hides the text. When building with officecli batch, follow the per-card sequence bg → ellipse → title → body strictly. Pattern and z-order details → see pptx v2 §Recipe (c) z-order canon; reuse grid math from pptx v2 §(d) for non-2×2 counts.

Dark-background variant. Change card fill from F0F4F8 (light) to a lighter-dark shade like 1A2540 and bump body text to FFFFFF / E8E8E8. Palette variables (e.g. $MUTED) do NOT expand inside single-quoted heredocs — write the literal hex (64748B) in the JSON.


Key-slide recipes (10 essentials)

The 10 slides every pitch deck carries. Each recipe below gives: visual outcome (what the slide looks like from 3m away) + runnable block (≤ 18 lines) + QA one-liner. All recipes inherit pptx v2 palettes, grid math, type hierarchy, and --prop tailEnd=triangle on every connector. Recipes reference the Slide Patterns above: Cover reuses C.1; Problem / Why-Now reuse C.2; Traction / Financials reuse C.4; Feature / pillar slides reuse C.5b. $FILE is your deck file.

Long-title wrap rule. A 36pt+ title that wraps to 2 lines: add height (e.g. 2cm → 3.5cm) — never drop the font below 36pt. Titles < 36pt on a pitch deck read as timid regardless of content.

Chart series1.color= on add works (applies to every chart recipe below). Passing --prop series1.color= (or series2.color=, …) on chart add applies the series color and exits 0. Verify with a readback if you like: officecli get "$FILE" "/slide[N]/chart[1]/series[1]" --json | jq '.data.results[0].format.color'.

(1) Cover slide — company · tagline · round · date

Visual outcome. Dark navy fill, centered 44pt company name, 20pt one-line tagline underneath, small 16pt meta line at the bottom with round + amount + date. Thin brand band at the very bottom (0.5cm high) in the accent color.

officecli add "$FILE" / --type slide --prop layout=blank --prop background=1E2761
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[1]" --type shape --prop name=BrandBand \
  --prop geometry=rect --prop fill=CADCFC \
  --prop x=0cm --prop y=18.5cm --prop width=33.87cm --prop height=0.55cm
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[1]" --type shape --prop name=CoverTitle --prop text="Acme DevOps" \
  --prop x=2cm --prop y=7cm --prop width=29.87cm --prop height=3cm \
  --prop font=Georgia --prop size=44 --prop bold=true --prop color=FFFFFF --prop align=center --prop fill=none
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[1]" --type shape --prop name=Tagline --prop text="Kubernetes observability, built for production at scale" \
  --prop x=2cm --prop y=10.5cm --prop width=29.87cm --prop height=1.5cm \
  --prop font=Calibri --prop size=20 --prop color=CADCFC --prop align=center --prop fill=none
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[1]" --type shape --prop name=CoverMeta --prop text='Series B · $35M · April 2026' \
  --prop x=2cm --prop y=15cm --prop width=29.87cm --prop height=1.2cm \
  --prop font=Calibri --prop size=16 --prop color=FFFFFF --prop align=center --prop fill=none

QA. Cover has 4 discrete elements (brand band + title + tagline + meta). 80%-whitespace covers fail the pptx "cover ≥ 60% filled" floor.

Consumer variant (3-second grab). Consumer decks (B2C app / hardware / D2C) should add a single dominant motif — hero product shot, oversized company name (60–96pt), or symbolic mark (crescent moon / abstract geometric). Replace the 44pt title with an 80–96pt name + one motif shape (--type shape --prop geometry=ellipse --prop fill= for an abstract mark, or picture at ~40% of slide for a product hero). Keep tagline + round + date identical. SaaS / B2B may skip — the typographic-only cover is sufficient.

(2) Problem slide — industry pain in 1 sentence + 3 data cards

Visual outcome. 36pt title stating the pain (not "The Problem"). Below, three equal-width data cards across the slide: each a giant number (40pt) + one-line qualifier (16pt) + source footnote (12pt gray).

Grid math for 3 cards, 1.5cm margins, 0.76cm gap: usable = 33.87 − 3 − 2·0.76 = 29.35, col_width = 29.35 / 3 = 9.78cm. x-positions: 1.5 / 12.04 / 22.58.

SLIDE=2  # second slide, after cover. Adjust from your build order.
officecli add "$FILE" / --type slide --prop layout=blank --prop background=FFFFFF
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[$SLIDE]" --type shape --prop text="Kubernetes debugging burns 12 engineering hours / incident" \
  --prop x=1.5cm --prop y=1.2cm --prop width=30.87cm --prop height=2.5cm \
  --prop font=Georgia --prop size=36 --prop bold=true --prop color=1E2761 --prop fill=none
cat < 1 hour to diagnose","x":"1.5cm","y":"9.5cm","width":"9.78cm","height":"3cm","font":"Calibri","size":"18","color":"333333","align":"center","fill":"none"}},
  {"command":"add","parent":"/slide[$SLIDE]","type":"shape","props":{"text":"Source: 2025 DORA Report","x":"1.5cm","y":"13cm","width":"9.78cm","height":"1cm","font":"Calibri","size":"12","italic":"true","color":"666666","align":"center","fill":"none"}}
]
EOF
# Repeat the 4-block pattern at x=12.04cm and x=22.58cm for cards 2 and 3.

QA. officecli query "$FILE" 'shape:contains("Source")' returns ≥ 3 (every claim carries a source). If zero sources, VCs will not trust a single number.

(2b) Why Now slide — Consumer / Seed / early A must-have

Visual outcome. 3 cards across: each = trigger headline (24pt bold) + data point (60pt number or date) + one-line implication (16pt) + source footnote (12pt gray). Reuse Problem grid math (col=9.78cm, x = 1.5 / 12.04 / 22.58). §赛道 Consumer row 2 must-have; Seed / early A in any vertical benefits when "market window" IS the thesis.

SLIDE=3
officecli add "$FILE" / --type slide --prop layout=blank --prop background=FFFFFF
officecli add "$FILE" "/slide[$SLIDE]" --type shape --prop text="Why now: three converging triggers" \
  --prop x=1.5cm --prop y=1.2cm --prop width=30.87cm --prop height=2.5cm \
  --prop font=Georgia --prop size=36 --prop bold=true --prop color=1E2761 --prop fill=none
# Card 1 (x=1.5cm) — trigger / data / implication / source. Repeat at x=12.04cm and x=22.58cm.
cat < 100% acceptable, > 115% strong, > 130% exceptional |
| **CAC** | $ fully-loaded | Sales + marketing spend / new logos acquired |
| **LTV** | $ | ARPU × gross margin × (1 / churn rate) |
| **LTV:CAC** | ratio | VC floor: 3x OK, > 4x strong, > 5x exceptional |
| **CAC payback** | months | VC floor: < 18 mo OK, < 12 mo strong |
| **Gross margin** | % | SaaS floor 70%, strong 80%+; marketplace 15-40%; hardware 30-50% |
| **Burn / runway** | $/month + months | Gross burn vs net burn — label which; runway to specific milestone |
| **Use of Funds** | 4-bucket pie | Engineering / Go-to-Market / G&A / Reserve — see Ask slide recipe |

**Rule.** Every number on a deck carries a unit. `18%` or `18M` alone is ambiguous — write `$18M ARR` / `18% NRR growth`. `TBD`, `coming soon`, `(fill in)`, `lorem`, `xxxx` in numeric slots = immediate VC disqualification. Gate 6 greps these below.

## VC ship-check (6 red flags / positive signals)

What the VC reads in the first 30 seconds. Six one-line conditions — every "FAIL" below is an instant round-killer; fix before delivering.

| # | Red flag (FAIL if present) | Positive signal (shipwise) |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Cover without round + amount + date | `Company · tagline · Series X · $YM · Date` in 4 lines |
| 2 | TAM > $100B without a cited source / methodology | TAM clearly labeled bottom-up OR top-down with a visible 2024+ source |
| 3 | Traction chart y-axis does not start at 0 (hockey-stick lie) | Line chart `axismin=0`; growth shape honest |
| 4 | Team slide: headshots + names only, no prior companies | Every member: prior company + role + 1 achievement metric |
| 5 | Ask slide missing Use-of-Funds breakdown | `$XM` hero + 4-bucket pie (Eng / GTM / G&A / Reserve) + runway + next milestone |
| 6 | `TBD` / `lorem` / `xxxx` / `{{...}}` / `(fill in)` anywhere | `view text` clean — zero placeholder tokens |

**Common Series-specific failures.**
- **Series A specific** — bottom-up TAM calculated from a fictional enterprise-count × ACV (no reference customers to anchor the count); `CAC / LTV` shown with < 12 months of data (statistically meaningless).
- **Series B specific** — no unit-econ slide at all; CAC payback > 24 months without a "we're pre-scale, here's the plan" narrative; logo wall < 8 customers.
- **Series C specific** — no moat / defensibility slide; revenue growth shown without margin trajectory; international expansion stated but no specific launch plan / hires.

The Delivery Gate 6 block below executes checks 1–6 above via grep + query. Gate 5b fresh-eyes covers the visual judgments (hockey stick, team credibility) that grep can't see.

## Traction triple-pattern (ARR + milestones + logos)

For Series B+, traction often spans 2 slides: one for the chart + callout (recipe 7 above), one for **milestone timeline + logo wall**. Timeline = 4-6 horizontal dates with one-line events. Logo wall = 12-20 customer logos in a 4×N or 5×N grid, muted monochrome so no single brand dominates.

```bash
# Milestone timeline: 5 dates as circles on a horizontal line at y=8cm.
# Use pptx shapes (ellipse preset) + connectors (shape=straight) between them.
# Each milestone = ellipse at y=8cm + date label above + event description below.
# → See pptx v2 Recipe (d) row 9 (Roadmap timeline) for the canonical pattern.

# Logo wall: pictures in a 5×N grid. Typical spacing: logo width = 5cm, height = 2cm, gap = 0.4cm.
# grid math for 5 logos across, 1.5cm edge margin: usable = 33.87 − 3 − 4·0.4 = 29.27, col = 5.85cm
# (use 5cm logo width centered in each 5.85cm column)

QA. Logo wall should have ≥ 8 logos for Series B+, ≥ 4 for Series A. Fewer = "lighter than it looks"; more than 20 = pixel noise.

QA — Delivery Gate (executable)

Assume there are problems. First render is almost never correct. Pitch decks fail at two layers: structural (schema, token leaks — caught by pptx v2 Gates 1–3) and narrative (wrong stage, missing unit econ, TAM unsourced — the checks that make pptx v2 Gate 5b + Gate 6 indispensable). Every check must print its success message.

Gates 1–5a — inherited from pptx v2 verbatim

→ see pptx v2 §Delivery Gate L637-679. Copy-paste the full block:

  • Gate 1 — validate schema check (whitelist ChartShapeProperties warnings per C-P-2).
  • Gate 2 — token leak via view text grep ($xxx$, {{...}}, ``, lorem, xxxx, empty ()/[], \$/\t/\n literals).
  • Gate 3 — hyperlink rPr schema trap (C-P-1) — zero ``.
  • Gate 4 — slide-order sanity — cover first, dividers before sections, closing last.
  • Gate 5a — dark-on-dark contrast — every fill in {1E2761, 0A1628, 8B1A1A, 2C5F2D, 36454F} must declare near-white textColor. This includes charts rendered on that fill: chart title.textColor, legend.textColor, axis text default to dark and read as invisible on dark backgrounds — set them explicitly, or place the chart on a light card inside the dark slide.

Do not skip or reorder these five. Every pptx-layer defect caught by Gates 1–5a also fires on pitch decks.

Gate 2b — pitch-specific shell-strip signatures (MANDATORY). Gate 2 misses $35M that zsh silently stripped to empty (no residue to grep). Run this after Gate 2:

# $XXM stripped by zsh leaves bare " M ARR" / " M raised" / "Series [A-C] · M" patterns.
STRIP=$(officecli view "$FILE" text | grep -niE '(^|[^A-Za-z0-9])M (ARR|raised|Series|runway|round|raise)|Series [A-C] · M( |$)|runway · M|raised · M|raising ·? M')
[ -z "$STRIP" ] && echo "Gate 2b OK (no \$-strip signatures)" || { echo "REJECT Gate 2b (likely zsh \$-strip — re-issue with single quotes):"; echo "$STRIP"; exit 1; }

Fix: re-issue the offending add/set with single quotes around the text value (--prop text='Series B · $35M', not double quotes). The same strip hits chart series names / axis titles (--prop name="营收 ($M)" → legend shows 营收 ()): single-quote every chart prop carrying $.

Gate 5b — Visual audit via HTML preview (MANDATORY, NOT optional)

Gates 1–5a are token-grep defenses. They cannot see a rendered slide. This step is the only visual-assembly check. Do not skip.

Run officecli view "$FILE" html and Read the returned HTML. Walk every slide and answer, for EACH (inherits pptx v2 Gate 5b checklist; pitch-specific additions marked ⭐):

  • overlap: do any text shapes overlap each other or a chart?
  • dark-on-dark: is any text on a fill where fill brightness < 30% AND text brightness < 80%?
  • divider overlap: any giant decorative number (01/02/03 at 100pt+) colliding with the divider title text?
  • order sanity: does the slide sequence match your stage-appropriate narrative outline?
  • missing arrowheads: do flowchart/decision-tree connectors show direction, or plain lines?
  • ⭐ traction y-axis: does every ARR / revenue / growth line chart start at 0 on the y-axis? (Not 80% of current — that is the hockey-stick lie.)
  • ⭐ team credibility: does every team-slide card show a prior company or prior title? (Cards with just headshot + name = reject.)
  • ⭐ TAM / market number credibility: is the TAM under $100B for a niche market, or if ≥ $100B, is a methodology source cited? (A claimed $500B TAM with no source is an auto-reject red flag.)
  • ⭐ Use-of-Funds pie: does the ask slide carry a 4-bucket pie (Engineering / GTM / G&A / Reserve) or a 4-card row with %s?
  • ⭐ narrative completeness: is the order cover → problem → solution → market → product → model → traction → team → financials → ask, or your stage-appropriate permutation from §Stage diagnosis?

Instruction. Run officecli view "$FILE" html and Read the HTML. Walk every slide against the questions below. If rendering chart colors, animations, or zoom — those only show in the target viewer (PowerPoint / Keynote / WPS); ask the user to open .pptx directly for those runtime features.

For every slide: (a) Are slides in VC narrative order (cover → problem → solution → market → product → model → traction → team → financials → ask, with your stage's adjustments)? Flag any out-of-sequence. (b) Is every ARR / revenue / growth line chart y-axis anchored at 0? Flag hockey-stick visual lies. (c) Does the team slide carry prior-company credentials for each person? (Not just headshot + name.) (d) Does every TAM / SAM / SOM claim have a visible source or methodology? (e) Does the ask slide have a 4-bucket Use of Funds (Engineering / GTM / G&A / Reserve) and a specific next milestone + runway length? (f) Any text overlap, dark-on-dark, off-slide geometry, missing arrowheads, placeholder tokens (TBD / lorem / {{...}} / xxxx / empty ())?

Report every instance with slide number. If ANY defect — REJECT; do not deliver until fixed.

Human preview (optional). If you want the user to visually preview the deck, run officecli watch "$FILE" for a live preview the user can open at their own discretion, or have them open the .pptx directly in PowerPoint / WPS / Keynote. For final visual verification, open the file in the target presentation viewer.

Gate 6 — Pitch narrative sanity (executable)

Pitch-specific checks that grep the deck for VC red flags. Every one is a token check — combine with Gate 5b's human read for full coverage.

FILE="deck.pptx"

# 6.1 — no TBD / lorem / placeholder tokens (stronger than Gate 2 — pitch-specific scope)
LEAK=$(officecli view "$FILE" text | grep -niE 'TBD|lorem|\(fill in\)|xxxx|coming soon|placeholder')
[ -z "$LEAK" ] && echo "Gate 6.1 OK (no placeholder tokens)" || { echo "REJECT Gate 6.1:"; echo "$LEAK"; exit 1; }

# 6.2 — TAM / SAM / SOM presence (Series A+)
TAM_HIT=$(officecli query "$FILE" 'shape:contains("TAM")' --json | jq '.data.results | length')
[ "$TAM_HIT" -ge 1 ] && echo "Gate 6.2 OK (TAM slide present)" || echo "WARN Gate 6.2: no TAM mention — confirm stage is Seed / Bridge if intentional"

# 6.3 — Unit econ presence (Series B+): CAC OR LTV OR payback
CAC_HIT=$(officecli query "$FILE" 'shape:contains("CAC")' --json | jq '.data.results | length')
LTV_HIT=$(officecli query "$FILE" 'shape:contains("LTV")' --json | jq '.data.results | length')
if [ "$CAC_HIT" -ge 1 ] || [ "$LTV_HIT" -ge 1 ]; then
  echo "Gate 6.3 OK (unit econ surface)"
else
  echo "WARN Gate 6.3: no CAC / LTV — confirm stage Seed/A if intentional, REJECT if Series B+"
fi

# 6.4 — Use of Funds present on ask slide
UOF_HIT=$(officecli query "$FILE" 'shape:contains("Use of Funds")' --json | jq '.data.results | length')
[ "$UOF_HIT" -ge 1 ] && echo "Gate 6.4 OK (Use of Funds)" || { echo "REJECT Gate 6.4: ask slide missing Use of Funds"; exit 1; }

# 6.5 — Team prior-company signal (at least one of ex- / former / prior / previously)
PRIOR_HIT=$(officecli view "$FILE" text | grep -ciE '\b(ex-|former|prior|previously)\b')
[ "$PRIOR_HIT" -ge 1 ] && echo "Gate 6.5 OK (team prior-company)" || { echo "REJECT Gate 6.5: team slide has no prior-company credentials"; exit 1; }

# 6.6 — Traction chart y-axis anchored at 0 (at least one chart must set axismin=0, Series A+)
AXISMIN_HIT=$(officecli query "$FILE" 'chart' --json | jq '[.data.results[]? | select(.format.axisMin == "0" or .format.axisMin == 0 or .format.axismin == "0" or .format.axismin == 0)] | length')
[ "$AXISMIN_HIT" -ge 1 ] && echo "Gate 6.6 OK (traction chart axisMin=0)" || echo "WARN Gate 6.6: no chart sets axisMin=0 — confirm no ARR/revenue line chart, or add --prop axismin=0"

echo "Delivery Gate 6 PASS (token + narrative checks) — proceed to Gate 5b fresh-eyes (MANDATORY)"

Readback key note. CLI accepts lowercase axismin as input (on --prop axismin=0) but emits camelCase axisMin in query --json readback. The jq above accepts bo

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